“Dana was very thorough with my manuscript. She offered many suggestions to improve my story and left many line edits to strengthen my writing. With her suggestions, I'm sure my book will be amazing. I will definitely use her services in the future.”
-Nick, literary fiction
So you've written a novel.
Now what? Does your timeline make sense? Do your characters have clear stakes to keep your readers interested?
What about on the tenth page when your character appeared suave and sophisticated, and then on the hundred and tenth page when he got flustered by nothing? What changed? Is he still believable?
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